HELP!

Looking at the rough cut i do not think that it works, the voice-over conversation does not fit the split screen visuals. We have a couple of ideas for ways to make the opening work but time is short.

One idea you to fill the 40 seconds of black screen with shots of the surroundings and have voice over. thinking about it now we need a soundtrack, the opening is empty without one, a subtle soundtrack under our existing voice-overs.

another idea you to scrap the conversation voice-over completely and go with a strong soundtrack

these two ideas can be put together but TIME IS RUNNING OUT!