Outline of Our Final Idea

• Black screen
• Hears ringing of phone line
• Over lapping speaking, phone calls
• Then focuses on one phone call in particular
• Credits appearing randomly, floating in and off the screen,
• Women speaking, hello you've reached Cambridge confidential help line' something along those lines.
• Voice over of a women and a help line call centre talking to a man/boy
• 'Didn't you call yesterday...' making it apparent to the audience that they have developed a relationships, spoken before etc...
• Then focuses on the girl/women at the call centre. her lips, speaking, her pens, birthdays cards on her desk to show how ordinary her life is.
• Close ups, extreme close up
• Then a quick cut shot to the lips of the man on the other end of the phone call.
• Man in a park, hears birds.
• Split screen maybe
• Extreme close up on him rolling his fingers/ tapping them..
• Flicks back to her, tapping a open on the table, twirling her hair ....
• Average, normal conversation...
• Ends with him standing up, never see his face fully. His silhouet walking into the distance ...
• Maybe some simple music, no words within it.